{"id":7921,"date":"2023-04-06T10:08:36","date_gmt":"2023-04-06T17:08:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.catholicboy.com\/WP\/?page_id=7921"},"modified":"2023-04-06T10:20:16","modified_gmt":"2023-04-06T17:20:16","slug":"collaborative-poems","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.catholicboy.com\/WP\/works\/articles-poems-by-jim-carroll\/collaborative-poems\/","title":{"rendered":"Collaborative Poems"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Here are some of Carroll&#8217;s collaborations with other writers, all published only in magazines (or not at all, in the case of &#8220;Back Up Front&#8221;). &#8220;10 Things I Do When I Shoot Up,&#8221; published only in the <i>Another World<\/i> anthology, is here because it refers directly to Ted Berrigan&#8217;s &#8220;10 Things I Do Every Day.&#8221; I&#8217;ve also included the last piece, &#8220;Red Rabbit Running Backwards,&#8221; because it&#8217;s a sort of cutup of <i>Organic Trains<\/i> . . . quite possibly done by Ted Berrigan and published in Carroll&#8217;s name. Bonus trivia question: why is &#8220;Chez Rivers&#8221; included in this little collection?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>True Love (for ee cummings)<br>By Carter Ratcliff, Jim Carroll, and Peter Schjeldahl<br><i>Penumbra<\/i> 8 (1970)<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>With a little tooty shriek<br>The funny train tottered in<br>(Quilted overcoats!)<br>O China, there is a wall between us<br>A wall covered with velvet hangings<br>And between the hangings huge shields<br>And crossed weapons of fantastic make<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>It is not pleasant<br>To come upon death in a lonely place at midnight<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Shriek<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Why is the cry of the moorhen so lonely<br>When it is surrounded by all the other moorhens?<br>The wind is surrounding us like a question and<br>Then a question mark followed by an exclamation point<br>And then a parenthesis that locks us up on this planet like gravity<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>A sob like Mach 2 on Borthor<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The egrets shuffle along the walls like a squirrel<br>They leap high<br>Pass beneath us<br>Wheel<br>And charge back<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Under the mattress for a word with the mole<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">And here is longitude, looping<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Over the fender like an exhaust pipe<br>While breath continues to slide along the wet pavement<br>And the hockey teams clumsily prepare for winter<br>&#8220;Ah, November!&#8221; shriek<br>the hockey teams, &#8220;you are here already with<br>your fierce skies and piercing flakes!&#8221; pounding<br>each other with their sticks for joy<br>(And here come the King, barons, courtiers,<br>soldiers, locusts from a cloudy sky, Ren\u00e9<br>Ricard radiant in the blushing Cathedral,<br>Pastors swarming the alcove:<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">&#8220;Sanctuary!&#8221;) and<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">The crowd arose and dispersed in the noisy summer wind<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">July 21, 1968<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300;\"><b><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica; font-size: large;\">Back Up Front (for Ted Berrigan)<\/span><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\"><br>By Bill Berkson and Jim Carroll<br>From the library of Ted Berrigan<\/span><\/b><\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">&nbsp;Now that you&#8217;re coming back<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">I thought you&#8217;d never go<br>leaving us<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">with wet spots on our brains<br>like napkins tossed<br>across Second Avenue<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">you walking there<br>in that elephant way<br>See to it<br>that this time you stay<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">either way you play it<br>3 ladies are terrific<br>even a little terrifying<br>in their dotty chintzes<br>&amp; haggish scowls<br>But they&#8217;re not you.<br>See to it<br>that you&#8217;ll try to<br>see it my way<br>as strides match up<br>yours is a light one<br>we ride on with it or fall<br>by the wayside, but not today<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Ted, I&#8217;ve come to<br>miss you<br>like a Prodigal&#8217;s son<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Now the only thing that&#8217;s missing is<br>The bloody moon in that kitchen sink<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">And today you&#8217;re back<br>To see about it,<br>you think.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">1.20.70<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300;\"><b><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica; font-size: large;\">10 Things I Do When I Shoot Up<br><\/span><i><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Another World: A Second Anthology of Works from the St. Mark&#8217;s Poetry Project<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">, ed. Anne Waldman (Bobbs-Merrill, 1970)<br><\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\"><br>Go to the mirror<br>comb my hair down straight<br>put on the Velvet Underground<br>nod out<br>my silver ring<br>read tiny poems<br>outline each future<br>everything fine<br>watch a Sherlock Holmes movie<br>check to see how much is left<br>go to the restaurants and flirt<br>sing I shall be released<br>nod out<br>giant beds with everyone I know<br>no sex<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300;\"><b><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica; font-size: large;\">Chez Rivers<\/span><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\"><br><i>Transatlantic Review<\/i> 55\/56 (1976)<\/span><\/b><\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Go to the window<br>and raise these fingers<br>to the sun.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">You won&#8217;t find it.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">It&#8217;s night.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Sleep attentively instead and<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">If you close the door<br>The night might last forever . . .<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">(Leave the glasses where they are)<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">You&#8217;re in a house.<br>It&#8217;s a good house.<br>Babies breathe in this house.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300;\"><b><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica; font-size: large;\">Red Rabbit Running Backwards (for A. W.)<br><\/span><i><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Stone Wind<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\"> 4 (1973): 113-114<\/span><\/b><\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><span style=\"color: #333300; font-family: Arial, Helvetica;\">Frantic sounds of make-up torn from a face<br>no!<br>we are both sick of zoo fantasy<br>to feel that way<br>the true winter would expose the icy jaws<br>of meat hung up above expensive neckties<br>so a candy heart is now a rock that indicates silence<br>(dada)<br>&amp; a song rises and realizes that its function is to be sung,<br>flatly,<br>not to sing. lead on fellow Americans<br>melt it on and fit my love<br>in a hurricane. The aesthetic value of a red tee shirt<br>you making me see that could be what I mean<br>if it were not for the fact that the hurricane has bent the trees<br>and I can&#8217;t see anything, in fact I can only feel. can only feel<br>the 8 colors inside which somehow seem to indicate that<br>all the clocks are falling on and around me from the sky.<br>The Communists know what I mean. But they hang out overseas<br>Which is why I am moving about in subway cars seeking<br>A jeweled carrot to feed this persistent rabbit which<br>a beautiful lady liar assured me actually had been cleverly<br>trapped for good last week in a cage of solid beef. The rabbit<br>Is probably the key to all of this. Rabbit ears.<\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"ext-copyright\"><b><i>All poems \u00a9 1970, 1973, 1976 by Jim Carroll<br>ALL RIGHTS RESERVED &#8211; UNAUTHORIZED DUPLICATION PROHIBITED<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Here are some of Carroll&#8217;s collaborations with other writers, all published only in magazines (or not at all, in the case of &#8220;Back Up Front&#8221;). &#8220;10 Things I Do When I Shoot Up,&#8221; published only in the Another World anthology, is here because it refers directly to Ted Berrigan&#8217;s &#8220;10 Things I Do Every Day.&#8221; &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.catholicboy.com\/WP\/works\/articles-poems-by-jim-carroll\/collaborative-poems\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Collaborative Poems<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":4165,"menu_order":1,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"advanced_seo_description":"","jetpack_seo_html_title":"","jetpack_seo_noindex":false,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"footnotes":""},"folder":[50],"class_list":["post-7921","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/P9VlUH-23L","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":9531,"url":"https:\/\/www.catholicboy.com\/WP\/background\/friends-influences\/important-people-in-carrolls-life-and-work\/artistic-influences-mentors-supporters\/ted-berrigan\/","url_meta":{"origin":7921,"position":0},"title":"Ted Berrigan","author":"Cassie Carter","date":"May 21, 2025","format":false,"excerpt":"Ted Berrigan (1934 - 1983) is one of the most important figures in Jim Carroll's life and work. 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